Artwork — two redraws

Same grammar throughout: 520×340 box, same frame, same three accents, same stroke weights. Only the idea being drawn has changed.

01 — Customer portals

New idea: the same portal, two accounts, each seeing only its own records

On the page now

Three avatars queue at a lock and one account view sits to the right. It shows sign-in, which is the least interesting thing a portal does.

Redraw

Two identical layouts, different data in each, a locked wall between them. Per-account scoping is what separates a portal from a members area, and nobody draws it.

04 — Bespoke business applications

New idea: off-the-shelf leaves gaps, a build fills the same space exactly

On the page now

A blueprint with dimension marks. Reads as technical, but it argues nothing — it could sit under any of the six sections.

Redraw

The dashed outline is the shape of the business. On the left a rectangular product drops in and the coral marks are what it does not cover. On the right the same space, filled. That is the argument for bespoke in one picture, with no words.